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Throughout the eyes by ~emeraldofshadow:iconemeraldofshadow:

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As I walk through this tunnel of roses and cherry blossoms
I whisper the truth for only me to hear
reminding myself of the oath I took
Father, is my pride based on nothing?
Mother, did I bleed in vain?
Give me guidance, give me confidence, and give me sight

If this is my home, why does it feel so empty?
Why do the days seem so short but every minute of my life seems to last an eternity?
I am sorrow, I am courage, I am fear and overjoyed
I have been marked by a thousand needles and twenty knives
My body being a floating leaf
guided by the winds of my thoughts

The whirlwind that now rages
and makes this devil tree leaf slash everywhere
with absolutely no direction
or purpose
just anger and fear

and now I stand upon a peak
furiously yelling at the clouds in the black and red sky
"KILL ME NOW! KILL ME NOW!! BY THE BLOOD THAT COURSES THROUGH ME, GIVE ME TRUTH OR BREAK ME!!"

open my doors Father
hold me to my word Mother
I am fading from sight
©2004-2009 ~emeraldofshadow
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Submitted: September 11, 2004
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Inspired on my lunthinia stories,I tend to feel this way and daydream that I am Raoren.
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~thestaticblurr:iconthestaticblurr: Sep 11, 2004, 12:56:30 PM
pretty

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save tha drama fo yo mamma
~emeraldofshadow:iconemeraldofshadow: Sep 11, 2004, 7:29:10 PM
thx:)

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:skull:"I ain't got no fuckin' class," he said, took his hands out of his pockets and resumed walking like he normally does,"I be just an undead pirate captain.":skull:-Captain Edward Blaqk :ahoy:
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~StarsofHope:iconStarsofHope: Sep 13, 2004, 6:11:33 PM
ummm WOW its really good you can feel the pain and tell that he feels empty and thats great that you showed it so good
~emeraldofshadow:iconemeraldofshadow: Sep 14, 2004, 3:14:12 PM
Why thank you.Some of this actually is what I went through.:ninjabattle:

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:skull:"I ain't got no fuckin' class," he said, took his hands out of his pockets and resumed walking like he normally does,"I be just an undead pirate captain.":skull:-Captain Edward Blaqk :ahoy:
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~Sutara:iconSutara: Mar 31, 2005, 8:40:00 PM
Truly fantastic,I felt the emotions so deep I felt the pain and anger and yet the defiance of ones soul in torment...:+favlove: Excellant work!

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~emeraldofshadow:iconemeraldofshadow: Apr 1, 2005, 8:54:37 AM
:D thanx!! and thnx for the fav!:D :hug:

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:skull:"I ain't got no fuckin' class," he said, took his hands out of his pockets and resumed walking like he normally does,"I be just an undead pirate captain.":skull:-Captain Edward Blaqk :ahoy:
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